I like the bit about the chocolate ducks, but I rather disagree with your feelings on dishwashers. I am ambivalent about the passage beginning 'in that time I was living in the steaming wet core of Brazil with two trilbies and a monkey' and ending 'one sock, battered, please, on the rocks', but it's literary power is undoubtable.
Responding to the various questions posed to the reader during the piece: yes, no, yes, yes, why not, because I prefer donuts, and yes.
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I like the bit about the chocolate ducks, but I rather disagree with your feelings on dishwashers. I am ambivalent about the passage beginning 'in that time I was living in the steaming wet core of Brazil with two trilbies and a monkey' and ending 'one sock, battered, please, on the rocks', but it's literary power is undoubtable.
Responding to the various questions posed to the reader during the piece: yes, no, yes, yes, why not, because I prefer donuts, and yes.